1nc - rachel
pretty clear
good that you put so much on case, but I wish your frontline was divided between the likelihood of prostitution AND how to weigh thing
2ac
signposting on case needs to be fixed
your arg about wives being sacrificed instead of prostitutes is interesting; the CP also doesn't adjust how SK acts
dont read your "k of da" as a separate (or reference it at all in road map) - just make it an answer and force the neg to be smart enough to do cross aps
i think you need more DA presses against allied prolif
2nc
be more careful when kicking out of positions - its good to extend a specific 2ac argument and to make an argument about them not getting hte permutation
the cap overview is tooo long
itnegrate more links in about the !AC rhetoric/specific tags.
1nr
i think you need to do more impact calc on why war = worsen structural violence and in particular for the S Korean Pros
You should also do more to defend the "bias" of your ev
1ac cx - Ish - your cx losses focus
1nc - rachel
pretty clear
good that you put so much on case, but I wish your frontline was divided between the likelihood of prostitution AND how to weigh thing
2ac
signposting on case needs to be fixed
your arg about wives being sacrificed instead of prostitutes is interesting; the CP also doesn't adjust how SK acts
dont read your "k of da" as a separate (or reference it at all in road map) - just make it an answer and force the neg to be smart enough to do cross aps
i think you need more DA presses against allied prolif
2nc
be more careful when kicking out of positions - its good to extend a specific 2ac argument and to make an argument about them not getting hte permutation
the cap overview is tooo long
itnegrate more links in about the !AC rhetoric/specific tags.
1nr
i think you need to do more impact calc on why war = worsen structural violence and in particular for the S Korean Pros
You should also do more to defend the "bias" of your ev